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Mummy mummy,
I met this girl

Mummy mummy,
I know you will like her

Mummy mummy,
She's a special sort of girl
She's kind
and beautiful
She's friendly
and loving

Mummy mummy,
I know she's the one

Mummy muumy,
What's wrong

Mummy mummy,
But I know you will like her

Mummy mummy,
Please don't frown

Mummy mummy,
Please don't hate me
Just a little something
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notofthisearth Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Well Done...

Billy
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HaloneWolf Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is do good Im pretty sure I'm bi but I dont know what my parents would think I know they don't hate gays but I'll tell them in a few years
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LittlePenguinTula Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like this. It's simple and unique and eye catching all at the same time xD I don't like poems that are trying to be too 'artistic'. Normally the better ones are the ones that are artistic JUST because they're unique and well thought out and structured. They're far more emotive to read then ones with fancy grammar in them. Just my opinion aha. :hug: One question: am I right in saying that the message in this is what homophobia can do to relationships between parents and their children? Is the child upset because she wants her parents to accept her love, whether it be with a boy OR a girl?
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eye-liner-lover Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you I'm glad you like it and yeah that's sums up the poem almost perfectly :huggle:
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LittlePenguinTula Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I really dooo :') And I'm glad I understood it haha (;
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So-Nyann Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
COMMENTING AGAIN! So, I've read this ten times, still makes me cry. :cling:
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Gabbigale-TheGoober Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was beautifully done!
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eye-liner-lover Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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Gabbigale-TheGoober Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ur welcome!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was good but the ending came a bit abrupt. I would have liked a bit more of the mummy mummy going on.
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